Thursday 22 January 2015

Magazine Pitch:

17 comments:

  1. I believe that the target market is 16-23 year old Indie Scenesters, RAHs and Young Alts.

    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Lana Del Rey, Marina and the Diamonds and Paloma Faith.

    To improve, have you considered mentioning in the pitch the gender that you plan to aim it at- although I can see that your magazine may be female orientated, but you could have made this clearer.

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  2. I believe that the target market is 16 - 23 year old Females.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists FKA Twigs.
    To improve, have you considered setting a specific colour scheme.

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  3. I believe the target market is 16-23 (indie scensters, young alts and RAH's)
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Marina and the diamonds, Lana Del Rey and Paloma Faith.
    To improve, have you considered new artists to fit the indie theme.
    I like the retro meets posh idea I think this will give the magazine a good style.

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  4. I believe that the target market is 14 - 20 year olds indie scenesters and young alts.

    i anticipate the following artists, Paloma faith, Marina and the diamonds and Haim.

    To improve you should put the gender you are aiming it at and how often the magazine comes out.

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  6. I believe that your target market is 16-23 year old females.
    I anticipate seeing artists like; Paloma Faith, Marina and the diamonds and lana del rey.
    To improve have you considered looking at artists that are very 'limited edition' as it could interest further audiences.

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  7. I believe that the target market is 16-23 year old Indie Scenesters, RAHs and Young Alts.

    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Lana Del Rey, Marina and the Diamonds and Paloma Faith.

    To improve, have you considered whether you are aiming at males or females.

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  8. I believe that the magazine is for 16-23 year old, predominantly female RAH's and Alts.

    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Marina and the Diamonds, Florence and the Machine, Lana Del Ray.

    To improve, shorten the pitch slightly and emphasise which gender you are aiming at.

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  9. I believe that the target market is girls aged between 15-19 year olds, due to the title of your magazine being 'Primadonna' and Teen Idle being the chosen track.

    I anticipate seeing artists such as: Marina and the Diamonds, Lana Del Rey and FKA twigs

    To improve, place more emphasis on the fact that the magazine is aimed at females as it is titled 'Primadonna'

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  10. I believe the target market is 16-23 year old, Indie pop
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; Lana Del Rey and Paloma Faith
    To improve, have you considered saying whether you are aiming it and males or females instead of just pictures

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  11. I believe that the target audience is as you said and I think that you make a clear indication to your target audience of 16 - 23 year olds.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as Lana Del Rey and Paloma Faith as you have mentioned. I believe that to improve, I would maybe raise the price slightly. This is due to the fact that the age of your target audience is that of those who will have jobs, meaning they can afford to spend more. This then connects to the frequency, as a monthly magazine would have a lot of detail and the price tag you have given i feel does not give an impression of lots of content. However, i do like the inspiration from Bazaar as this is not as big as other magazines with the same genre. I do look forward to seeing your magazine, however i would be wary as there is a lot of this kind of magazine around, therefore make this one individual and stand out.

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  12. Although you have not given a clear indication as to the gender of your target audience, I believe that the tone of the pitch clearly shows a female target audience.

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  13. I believe that you have a very good indication to your target audience, i do believe your target audience is 16-23, as you have said in your pitch and i believe this to be a correct age range.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as, Lana Del Rey, Paloma Faith in which you have mentioned, also i think you could include artists such as Lorde to relate more to your age range.To improve i feel you could up the price, due to your magazine being a monthly one, it should be quite thick and detailed, due to this i feel the priced should be slightly higher. Also your age range is 16-23 so i feel you can afford to up the price due to this age range due to the lower end of the age range having part time jobs so they will have more spare money and the higher end of the age range either at Uni or working so they will have more money to.

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  14. I believe that the target audience is mainly female, and ranges from older teens to young adults.
    I anticipate seeing mainly female, electro pop artists such as Marina and The Diamonds, Florence and the machine and Lana Del Ray.
    You could have improved by being specific about whether it was targeted at only females, however this does come through in the tone of the pitch.

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  16. I believe the target audience is 16-23 year olds, Young Alts and RAHs. Im guessing mainly female due to the name of your magazine being Primadonna, the genre of music and artists involved.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as Marina and the Diamonds, Lana Del Rey and Florence and the machine.
    To improve have you considered giving more specific information about your target audience and stating it such as gender, however it does seem clear because of the style of your magazine that it will be female. You could also include new and upcoming artists to fit in with your indie style theme. I really like the idea of your magazine and I think you have chosen an appropriate audience and artists to fit with it, I look forward to seeing this when it is done.

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  17. I believe the target audience is 16 - 23 year old females into indie pop (Indie scenesters, Young Alts and RAHs)
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; Marina And The Diamonds, Lana Del Rey and Paloma Faith.
    To improve, have you considered raising the price as 16 to 23 year olds usually have a decent amount of disposable income, this would also give the impression that it would be a high-quality magazine with a lot of detail I look forward to seeing this when it is done

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